Critic???

The site is a good start but needs some work in the following areas:

(i) English text has many syntax, spelling and grammatical errors. If possible, you should get someone for whom English is the native language to write the text or at least proof it.

(ii) The pages do not center on the screen and they are too big for the browser. It would be better to narrow the style sheet so that it all fits conveniently on the screen. In general, the formatting of the page needs to have more attention to detail - the spacing, centering, etc. give the impression of being a bit uneven.

(iii) On the detail of each individual piece of jewelry, add a more detailed description of the piece, where it's from, something to hook the person and interest them in the product. I don't know much about jewelry so a visit to your site should add to my knowledge of the product you're selling.

Good luck with your business. : )

Regards