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Old August 1st, 2007, 11:45 PM
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signtee.slashdesigns.com -- First time posting my site.....

Hey guys, I am doing some work for a client and I would like to know your honest thoughts.

It is STILL a WORK IN PROGRESS, so be gentle. A lot of the text is just filler and there are obvious things missing (flash objects, etc).

This site has really made me work on my conditional asp statements quite a bit. My code is messy but functional (isn't that the point anyways, just for the finished product to work?)

Anyways, let me know your thoughts!

be gentle.......

http://signtee.slashdesigns.com

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I quite like it

Just one thing, you are allowing users to enter nothing
into the text boxes in the order and contact us form, maybe
just check if the user submits data before sending, and also
check for valid email address on the contact us form.
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Looks good. Just a couple of points.

I would change the mouseover colour on the top links as they're a bit dark to see against the background.

In your FAQ's under flute direction you have "We print sings for use " I assume this should be signs.

Also "...and can be easily place into the ground." Change place for placed.

I would maybe lighten up the text backgrounds slightly to make it a little easier to read. I found the black lettering on the dark grey background (Signs and FAQs) a little hard to read.

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I quite like it

Just one thing, you are allowing users to enter nothing
into the text boxes in the order and contact us form, maybe
just check if the user submits data before sending, and also
check for valid email address on the contact us form.


Thanks for the advice!

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Looks good. Just a couple of points.

I would change the mouseover colour on the top links as they're a bit dark to see against the background.

In your FAQ's under flute direction you have "We print sings for use " I assume this should be signs.

Also "...and can be easily place into the ground." Change place for placed.

I would maybe lighten up the text backgrounds slightly to make it a little easier to read. I found the black lettering on the dark grey background (Signs and FAQs) a little hard to read.

Hope that helps.


The text was a direct copy from what my client had sent me, most of it (as you have found) will require a ton of editing.

THanks for the advice on the backgrounds, I will look into it!

THanks!

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Here are a couple of things...

1. I would add some sort of sign/tshirt/etc preview, so they can visualize what their sign looks like.
2. I would give the user the ability to select colors and text fonts if this is possible. It would add value to the service.
3. Does the site validate if a user does not have javascript enabled?
4. The contact us page, the textboxes don't line up. I would make each value on its own row.

Looking good though.

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nice design. light and simple.
I would make the logo (logo.gif) link to the homepage, that's very common thing
in many websites.
also, while adding client side validation to forms is not essential it's pretty
important and make the website look more professional.
also, when submitting some form, I would expect some kind of response from
the server: either thank you message indicating success, or some message
saying what went wrong or what I was missing.

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