June 27th, 2004, 03:25 PM
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Overall the website looks great. The graphics are very nicely done, the artwork looks super, and it seems to have been carefully debugged.
Kila -
Nobody had reviewed your site so I decided to go take a look.
I only noticed two small areas where it could use a bit of improvement. One, the punctuation in the text could be better. My mom was an English teacher so welcome to my nightmare here, but I noticed several instances of places where a comma was used improperly in place of a semi-colon, or a new sentence was started with a small letter. Also, some of the new paragraphs need to have a line break before them to separate them from the previous paragraph.
The second one is that the text font could be just a bit larger to make it easier on us old folks.
Otherwise everything looks great.
Regards
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