FreedomWeb.US Enterprises

Hey,

Can you guys please give me some feedback on two things, first is the main home site:

http://www.freedomweb.us/

The other is X-Login v1.0.1:

http://demos.freedomweb.us/68726b6c...2D67a2792d37d3/

I want to make X-Login on of the best platforms for User Authentication and Content Protection. So please tell me what I need to work on and what needs to be fixed. Please do login as both admin and as user. X-Login v2 should be released in three flavors: ASP Classic, ASP.NET 1.1, and ASP.NET 2.0.

Hi

Although your site looks very coprate, it doesn't scream or even resemble what your selling, advising, or informing the client of. When i first clicked on it, I had to really look on what it was offering and even know I am still very confused.

your homepage lacks personality and identity, to mean it says something about x-login, which is all very well but if the person like me has no idea what x-login is then the site is useless and will click the back button before reading it, plus that looks like your ownly product.

Your images are clear and nice but not related to the product you are selling, and they stay the same through the site and although that gives it consistancy, it also makes it more confusing as there are no other pictures to inform the client at first glance what they are looking at, it makes it look very much like either a PR company, a recruitment company or possibly and acting company. I would change them to be relevant to the pages they are on.

Your english also needs work, although I cannot comment as I have to get my dad even at 29 to check my english but as an example your home page you start both sentances with we and on the about us page you start more than half of the sentances with we, in reflection we is used way way to much, it should flow alot better.

This isn't perfect but reads better (the about us page)

FreedomWeb.US Enterprises is one of the leading web development companies on the internet, striving to produce quality and scalable web applications. We also offer custom web development and free and paid web hosting. Our partnerships with numerous sites to bring you even more services, offering web development support and other services for webmasters and developers. Now in 2005 FreedomWeb.US Enterprises continues to strive to be the development, will continuing to surprise you with new innovations and new applications.

Your images on the first page are also confusing, the cross next to the word login, says to me that either the login is not working, or you are stopping people login, which from what i can make out is the oposite of what you are trying to acheive.

Your developers page, instead of showing what your developers are working, have a very odd list of sites, from an uncomplete MMORPG site to paypal, plus your runescape link doesn't work cos the link goes to runscape. I would simplify it and have screen shots of what you developing and explain what you have done in the development, with possibly a link to the site, although i know some corprate comanies don't like developers putting there projects in there portfolios.

Your products page is still more confusing, with the same crosses in the images misleading the client, and loads of links going to free scipt sites, if I am a developer I should know these sites and if i am new hy do i need to use you if i can use all these free sites you provide, including a forum as good as this one. Plus I still don't know if you are offering the email service (x-send) and why would a developer need that as they should have email web mail etc, and i don't feel either products have enough information or help about them.

On your support page, I like the url checker but would like to know why it won't support your product.

I think you services page also is a little vague and a little unprofessional in your wording, maybe changing it a little will provide a better idea for clients in a more coperate manner.

Hope thats not to harsh and good luck

Again it is only my personal view

Thank You for your comments, I will see what changes I can make, what about the X-Login app.

http://demos.freedomweb.us/68726b6c...2D67a2792d37d3/