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Old November 5th, 2006, 07:52 AM
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the website is full of small syntax and grammar errors.. all in all
anyone speaking English as his/her native language will notice
this very fast and probably go away.

any decent person will take no more than $15 for such task as
going through the pages and fix the language.
(about one hour of work)

if you can't spend such money I really suggest you find good friend
of yours who do speak English and ask him/her to help you out.. I
doubt anyone here will do it for free.
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Old November 5th, 2006, 09:49 AM
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This is a small example here, and I not trying to pick on your grammar as I know English is not your primary language:


In English, you would want to say it similar to this for people to understand: "It is too bad that people will not be able to understand the concept of my website. Do you believe that at least 50% of the viewers will be able to interpret and browse easily through the site? -- of course, much of this is in my words.... just trying to give you some example that I hope will help you In all regards, the business concept for the site seems very approachable. I wish you luck and success in those ventures.



sorry but i dont think he was trying to say that ( i know it's open to interpretation0 he was only asking "if his english was that bad, how much the readers would actually understand"....

i understand where he's coming from as I need to write for a french site... and writing in different languages is hard!!!
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guys do you try to tell me : "you did not success to tell the visitors what in your mind cause your english language is weak" ?
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Old November 5th, 2006, 10:45 AM
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the website is full of small syntax and grammar errors.. all in all
anyone speaking English as his/her native language will notice
this very fast and probably go away.

any decent person will take no more than $15 for such task as
going through the pages and fix the language.
(about one hour of work)

if you can't spend such money I really suggest you find good friend
of yours who do speak English and ask him/her to help you out.. I
doubt anyone here will do it for free.


you are my best friend
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Old November 5th, 2006, 01:08 PM
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may be I should modify the website to my orginal lang :P ?
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Old November 5th, 2006, 06:54 PM
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may be I should modify the website to my orginal lang :P ?


To be honest that is not a bad idea until you can master or can get the services of someone who can project what you want to say/mean into the english language.
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Old November 5th, 2006, 07:04 PM
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Kaid, you really need to get the grammar thing under control fast - as you said your site is live -- not good! What about optimisation (seo) how will people find your site? Do you have it registered with all the major earch engines, what about directory listings or even people after reciprocal links (although one-way links give you a better pr)???


Its all good having a website but how do you get people to find it?
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Old November 6th, 2006, 02:39 AM
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guys do you try to tell me : "you did not success to tell the visitors what in your mind cause your english language is weak" ?
I fear the answer is yes.

--going to merge your two threads into single thread kaid,
no point in two threads about exactly the same thing.

Done. kaid, your "New Website" thread has been merged
into your "My Website" thread, please don't go all around
looking for it.
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Old November 6th, 2006, 10:17 AM
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Kaid, you really need to get the grammar thing under control fast - as you said your site is live -- not good! What about optimisation (seo) how will people find your site? Do you have it registered with all the major earch engines, what about directory listings or even people after reciprocal links (although one-way links give you a better pr)???


Its all good having a website but how do you get people to find it?


I have ad in adwords program (google)
and I added my url for almost the search engines website's
I got not bad visitor's in 1 week around 300 but not too much
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Old November 6th, 2006, 10:18 AM
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I fear the answer is yes.

--going to merge your two threads into single thread kaid,
no point in two threads about exactly the same thing.

Done. kaid, your "New Website" thread has been merged
into your "My Website" thread, please don't go all around
looking for it.


lol ok

okay meybe I will kick off my heart and modify it to my orginal lang..

but I will still love the english lang
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Old November 7th, 2006, 04:01 AM
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where your visitors are coming from? worldwide or only one place?
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Old November 7th, 2006, 04:15 AM
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where your visitors are coming from? worldwide or only one place?


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