Please review my site

Hi all,

I have developed a site for my business - www.arcevia.com. I have listings in Google and Overture PPC but not very good conventional listings. I get clicks through PPC but got very few enquiries. To be honest this is a home business and I would have my telephone no. on there but I don't have a business phone no and am reluctant in giving out the home no. due to prank calls. I have included meta tags too. I'm not sure why I'm not getting conversions. I would be very greatful in receiving feedback. Please take a look at the site and let me know what you think. Thank you.

Arcevia

Site notes:
- Check your Web site in Firefox. It has some layout and JavaScript problems.
- In my opinion your site has too much JavaScript. Some of users disable it (default option for all users of Win2003) and they cannot access some useful info like prices for example. Also in this case some of your content is not visible to search engines.
- Also I would recommend to move styles and JavaScript to an independent files it may improve your position in search engines a little.

Conversions:
- It is hard to say why you have low conversions without additional details, but make sure that you do not use too generic keywords for your PPC ads.


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Great flash work. However your site makes me ask myself. What is the most important piece of the site? When the shell you build is larger than the content itself. It means you have nothing to say....

wow that is a really nice website, i can't really tell you what to change or tell u any thing that doesn't look right because every thing to me is ok, i will even book mark your website just incase am to lazy when am older and have some money

1- your website layout looks small in 1024x768 resolution screen.
2- very little content (search engines love to see content)
3- not too many backlinks: you need a lot more backlinks to your website because these links are critical for good search engine listings. I went to yahoo and searched for linksite:www.arcevia.com, only 14 links found, 4 or 5 of them are from your own website, while google only shows 2 back links. This could be the main reason for not getting any results in search engines.
4- Your website's pagerank is 0, which means that it is new but not yet rated by google. This process can take some time, and to get more pagerank you need links from high PR pages

For now these are my comments, may come back later for more