Search engines Readiness review please

Please review my search engines readiness
http://www.onlinebusinesspackage.com

My main key word is "online business"

I have revised the salesletter and used a little bit better English. Any comments?

This has howver made the site lose it's high rank in some search engines. Help me if you can.

wrong adress for me.

I hate having to scroll down more than 2 pages in a site, that's why after what felt like an age and the scrollbar still only about halfway down, I gave up. May work for some - not for me!!!

Smells as though this is an attemted spam, that's how bad I thought the site looked!!!

ya i got it working.
definetly must be spam, since the whole "website" revolvs around 2 pages and links to other companys.

If you think I posted here to have you register in my "2 cents website", Please do not register. I have learnt a lot from humble well wishers who don't mind helping a crippling begger.
Your opinion is however, welcome. The reason I linked those pages like that is because the old one was ranking very high in search engines but with very low response. After I changed, results have greatly varried in response. I lost the high rank in search engines.

That is the reason I posted it here for a review.

Just telling it the way I saw it greggy, it looks dated and reeks of spam! I personally hate having to scroll more than 2 A4 page lengths down. There's no malice against your site just an honest outside opinion.